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The best way to travel is travel in a group led by a tour guide. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The best way to travel is travel in a group led by a tour guide. with this statement? 1B8M
I am reminiscing my 15 days long trip to the North of India, thanks to this topic. My family and I went on this trip approximately around 4 to 5 years back. It was by far the most invigorating experience of my life. We went through ‘Kesari tours and travels’ which ranks second from the top in the tourism industry of India. It was a tour guide led trip along with 20 other travelers. The day my father told us about this trip he had booked, we were so thrilled and ecstatic. I believe every individual should once experience traveling in a group led by a tour guide. Tour guides are experts and are supremely aware of the locations we wish to visit, enabling an enchanting experience. When you travel in a group led by a guide, there is a set timetable and schedule to each day. This allows you to avoid missing out on any particular activity that may have been pre-planned. I believe the best way to travel depends on one’s own personal choice. Vagabond personalities may not like to travel with a set schedule and would like to explore the location on their own. On the contrary, someone who likes an organized day will find a tour guide led vacation perfect for relaxing. This enables travelers to leave the decision-making to the guide.
I am reminiscing my 15 days long
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to the North of India, thanks to this topic. My family and I went on this
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approximately around 4 to 5 years back. It was by far the most invigorating experience of my life. We went through ‘
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Kesari
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tours
and
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travels’
which ranks second from the top in the tourism industry of India. It was a
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tour
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guide
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led
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along with 20 other travelers.

The day my father
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told
us about this
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he had booked, we were
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thrilled and ecstatic. I believe every individual should once experience traveling in a group
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led
by a
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tour
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guide
.
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Tour
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guides
are experts and are
supremely
aware of the locations we wish to visit, enabling an enchanting experience.

When you
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travel
in a group
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led
by a
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guide
, there is a set timetable and schedule to each day. This
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allows
you to avoid missing out on any particular activity that may have been
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pre-planned
. I believe the best way to
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travel
depends on one’s
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own
personal choice. Vagabond personalities may not like to
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travel
with a set schedule and would like to explore the location on their
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own
.
On the contrary
, someone who likes an organized day will find a
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tour
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guide
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led
vacation perfect for relaxing. This enables travelers to
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leave
the decision-making to the
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guide
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IELTS essay The best way to travel is travel in a group led by a tour guide. with this statement?

Essay
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3 paragraphs
226 words
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