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Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion.

Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Oj9j
Nowadays people around the world was very keen on sports, but some people argue that organising the global level sports in own country will be bad idea while some says its good once country. In this essay i will discuss the both views. however i my opinion in organising the sports in our country will benifet. To start with taking responsibilty to host and internatinal sports event will be bad idea there are two factors which our country look into it economy and infrastructure. Organising such events will cause huge amount of money which govermnet uses for tax payers, instead using for organising such events govermnet can use it for other norms. Insfrasturcure it is the main factor, the frame work of hotels and ground will not meet the abroad player to there needs which can create a bad opinion about the country. on the other hand, hosting such event will create a friendly nature between the nations, will boots the gdp growth and many youngsters will know the importance of the sports. organising events like this will be most welcoming thought and many nations will help economically and the nation will be recognised. not only recognisation it will boost the country gdp beacuse of in and out of international fans in the country. this will help many youngsters to have a faith and trust who opt there carrer as a sportsmen. To conclude this every country should welcome these kind of events to attract the international people and to make there country economically stable. Not only the recognisation by these kind of event hosting, the youngsters in the country can choose the carrer in sports as well.
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,
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some
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argue that
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organising
the global level
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in
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own
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will be
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bad
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while
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says its
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once
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. In this essay
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i
will discuss the both views.
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however
i my opinion in
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organising
the
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sports
in our
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will
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benifet
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with taking
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responsibilty
to host and
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internatinal
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sports
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event
will be
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bad
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there are two factors which our
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look into
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and infrastructure.
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events
will cause huge amount of money which
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govermnet
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uses
for tax payers,
instead
using for
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organising
such
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events
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govermnet
can
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use
it for other norms.
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it is the main factor, the frame work of hotels and ground will not
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meet
the abroad player to
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needs which can create a
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bad
opinion about the country.

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on
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event
will create a friendly nature between the nations, will
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the
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gdp
growth and
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many
youngsters will know the importance of the
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sports
.
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organising
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events
like this will be
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most
welcoming
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many
nations will
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only
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recognisation
it will boost the
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country
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gdp
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beacuse
of in and out of international fans in the
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country
.
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this
will
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help
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youngsters to have a faith and trust who opt there
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carrer
as
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a sportsmen
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this every
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country
should welcome
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these kind
of
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events
to attract the international
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people
and to
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make
there
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economically
stable. Not
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the
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recognisation
by
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these kind
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event
hosting, the youngsters in the
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can choose the
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carrer
in
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sports
as well
.
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IELTS essay Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad.

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