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The best way to solve the words environmental problem is to Increase the price of fuel .To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The best way to solve the words environmental problem is to Increase the price of fuel. Y8LB
Environmental pollution has been a major concern in today's society. A majority of multitudes think that atmosphere obstacles should be solved by increase the rate of fuel. In my opinion, it some extent extent with this statement it may help to some extent; however, it is not only method to safe the environment. Let us deliberate some compelling reasons which will lead towards a logical inference. To embark on, there are a number of reasons to shore light upon the given statement. Discussing the first point, increasing the price of petrol can assist ameliorate the environmental pollution in some degree.
Environmental pollution has been a major concern in
today
's society. A majority of multitudes
think
that atmosphere obstacles should
be solved
by increase the rate of fuel. In my opinion, it
some
extent extent
with this statement it may
help
to
some
extent;
however
, it is not
only
method to safe the environment.
Let
us deliberate
some
compelling reasons which will lead towards a logical inference.

To embark on, there are a number of reasons to shore light upon the
given
statement. Discussing the
first
point, increasing the price of petrol can assist ameliorate the environmental pollution in
some
degree.
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IELTS essay The best way to solve the words environmental problem is to Increase the price of fuel.

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
100 words
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