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The best way to reduce youth crimes is to educate their parents with good parenting skills. Do you agree or disagree.

The best way to reduce youth crimes is to educate their parents with good parenting skills. LnB3
With the rise in the modernization, there are increase in criminal activity by youngster all across the world. It is undoubtedly the case that do educating parents the good parenting skills help to drop the crime rate by the youngsters? . I totally agree with the statement become parenting is important for children. Through this essay, I shall explore the topic in upcoming paragraph. Beyond doubt, parenting plays a significant role in person life. If parents are being educated by the good parenting skills it help to drop the crime rate as parents always take care of their children and teach them good moral skills. Moreover, parents always motivate their children to do constructive things for society rater than spending your time in other activities. For instance, the recent survey conducted by times of India among two group of people one has good parenting skills and others do not have asserts that the children who faced good parenting by their parents are less involved in non official activity. Moving further, if children have faced a good parenting by his parents then children do not dare to participate in criminal activity as children already know the consequence of participation as it is not good for his career. In addition to this, parents always guide their children to do good work. To conclude, there is no doubt that parenting plays a crucial role in the upbringing of the children and if parents are taught good parenting skills then I will be a effective way to drop crime by youngster.
With the rise in the modernization, there are increase in criminal activity by youngster all across the world. It is
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the case that
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skills
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. Through this essay, I shall explore the topic in upcoming paragraph.

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plays a significant role in person life. If
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parents
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being educated
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help
to drop the crime rate as
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parents
always take care of their
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children
and teach them
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good
moral
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skills
.
Moreover
,
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parents
always motivate their
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children
to do constructive things for society rater than spending your time in other activities.
For instance
, the recent survey conducted by times of India among two group of
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people
one has
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good
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parenting
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skills
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and others
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children
who faced
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by their
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are less involved in
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non official
activity.

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further
, if
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children
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parenting
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parents
then
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children
do not dare to participate in criminal activity as
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already know the consequence of participation as it is not
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good
for his career.
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to this,
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parents
always guide their
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children
to do
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good
work.

To conclude
, there is no doubt that
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parenting
plays a crucial role in the upbringing of the
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children
and if
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parents
are taught
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good
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parenting
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skills
then I will be
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a
effective way to drop crime by youngster.
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IELTS essay The best way to reduce youth crimes is to educate their parents with good parenting skills.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
257 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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