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buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets, and groceries, is becoming more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experiencebuying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets, and groceries, is becoming more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets, and groceries, is becoming more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages? Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience 0xn9
In the modern world today, shopping online is becoming more and more popular. With one click people buy many things such as books, clothes, shoes, tickets and even groceries. Some people think that online shopping is not convenient as you do not see real items but I believe that in this fast-paced world online shopping should ha First of all, it is more comfortable to by things by online, whenever and wherever we are we just need a smartphone or a laptop and we can buy anything what we want. We also can order a product or a gift for someone. It will save a lot of times and money. Secondly, while shopping online we can see rating of products and sellers that will help us to choose quality products and avoid unnecessary and poor-quality goods. However, there is high possibility that sellers wont be honest, item can be faulty or delivery can be delayed but advantages of buying thing online exceeds disadvantages. In conclusion, rather than being inconvenient, shopping online is invaluable for most people. It saves money, time and energy. Depending on what kind of products you buy, you can look for the most sensible way of buying it.
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is becoming more and more popular. With one click
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people
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things such as books, clothes, shoes, tickets and even groceries.
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people
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online
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is not convenient as you do not
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see
real items
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fast
-paced world
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should ha

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, it is more comfortable to
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by
things by
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online
, whenever and wherever we are we
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just
need a smartphone or a
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laptop and
we can
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anything what we want. We
also
can order a
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product
or a gift for someone. It will save
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times and money.

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we can
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rating of
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products
and sellers that will
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us to choose quality
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products
and avoid unnecessary and poor-quality
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goods
.
However
, there is high possibility that sellers
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wont
be honest, item can be faulty or delivery can
be delayed
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advantages of buying thing
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online
exceeds disadvantages.

In conclusion
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than being inconvenient,
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shopping
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online
is invaluable for most
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people
. It saves money, time and energy. Depending on what kind of
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products
you
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buy
, you can look for the most sensible way of buying it.
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IELTS essay buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets, and groceries, is becoming more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages? Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

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