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The article is talking about "let is burn" policy. Article states that this policy caused more damage to everyone and give an example of Yellowstone in 1980 which is most famous national park where it burned for two months and spread over huge area and gi

The article is talking about " let is burn" policy. Article states that this policy caused more damage to everyone and give an example of Yellowstone in 1980 which is most famous national park where it burned for two months and spread over huge area and gi XG3e8
The article is talking about " let is burn" policy. Article states that this policy caused more damage to everyone and give an example of Yellowstone in 1980 which is most famous national park where it burned for two months and spread over huge area and give three kind of caused to support. However, the professor refutes all reasons saying that it is natural part and it is fundamentally good for nature. First, the reading says that Yellowstone fire caused tremendous damage to trees and vegetation and some smaller plants were entirely incinerated. However, the professor refute this by saying that it actually increase new plants after fire and it increase diverse trees and vegetation. Also some plants seeds are not burned in fire so they also ready to grow. They give an example that after fire many smaller plants are again growing up. Second, the article says that fire affects park's wildlife as many large animals like deer and elk were seen fleeing the fire and smaller animals were unable to escape. However, the professor refute this by saying it brings new opportunity for animals. As trees were again plant so smaller animals life rabbit can also find place in park and it brings food chain of this smaller and large animal becomes stronger. Finally, the reading says that fire compromised the value of park tourism and it puts negative consequences for the local economy as local business depended on park visitors. However, the professor refute this by saying that it only occurs in 1980 and that year has massive climate changes and after that it never happened again. After that year, every year tourist come to visit this park so assumption of negative effect is wrong.
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where it burned for two months and spread over huge area and give three
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caused tremendous damage to trees and vegetation and
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compromised the value of
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tourism and it puts
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visitors.
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IELTS essay The article is talking about " let is burn" policy. Article states that this policy caused more damage to everyone and give an example of Yellowstone in 1980 which is most famous national park where it burned for two months and spread over huge area and gi

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  American English
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288 words
5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
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