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Integrated essay " carrying capacity"

Integrated essay " carrying capacity" 7aKQX
The reading passage explains and defines the term " carrying capacity". The listening passage supports the information that is mentioned in the reading passage on this regard, and further provide an example to better undestand this term. First of all, the lecturer gives an example of a wolf population that is living in a forest and compares it with a massive rabbit population that lives in the same forest. According to the reading passage, the rabbit population is extremely high due to the existence of all the enviromental support that is needed for their living, as food, water, and shelter. . .
The reading
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passage
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explains
and defines the term
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"
carrying capacity
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"
. The listening
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passage
supports the information that
is mentioned
in the reading
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passage
on this regard, and
further
provide an example to better
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undestand
this term.

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First of all
, the lecturer gives an example of a wolf population
that is
living in a forest and compares it with a massive rabbit population that
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lives
in the same forest. According to the reading
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passage
, the rabbit population is
extremely
high due to the existence of all the
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enviromental
support that
is needed
for their living, as food, water, and shelter.
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IELTS essay Integrated essay " carrying capacity"

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
102 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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