Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

The ancients used to say, "Youth is full of enthusiasm, but thinking is often immature and impractical." What do you think about this opinion?

The ancients used to say, "Youth is full of enthusiasm, but thinking is often immature and impractical. " What do you think about this opinion? drBLp
Everyone's life is day by day passing over time, those who have lived in their youth and those who are still in youth are agree that time is a wonderfull time of their life. The ancients say it's not wrong when youth is the age when people live full of enthusiasm for work and love but their thoughts are still immature and immpractical. But their is not wrong that youth need some dreaming to an impractical things, it could be their goal for their to try hard for more at work or study. Maybe from their immature thoughts, they may fail or have many challenges in life but that will make them learn from experiance and try hard, maybe they will turn things that seem impact to reality come true. Youth, keep dreaming and do your best for your dreams, even if you may not come true, you will not regret it because at least you have been passionate and enthusiastic instead of lying in one place, not doing anything but want dream come true, that was impractical, think carefully for yourself and don't let your immature affect others, most is your family. For me, I think tries hard everyday for dream, no matter what anyones say, as long as we belive and act full of enthusiasm for our youth bacause everday is new day and there new changes are waiting for us to testing.
Everyone's life is day by day passing over time, those who have
lived
in their
youth
and those who are
still
in
youth
are
agree
that time is a
wonderfull
time of their life. The ancients say it's not
wrong
when
youth
is the age when
people
live
full of enthusiasm for work and
love
but
their thoughts are
still
immature and
immpractical
.
But
their
is not
wrong
that
youth
need
some
dreaming to an impractical
things
, it could be their goal for their to try
hard
for more at work or study. Maybe from their immature thoughts, they may fail or have
many
challenges in life
but
that will
make
them learn from
experiance
and try
hard
, maybe they will turn things that seem impact to reality
come
true.
Youth
,
keep
dreaming and do your best for your dreams, even if you may not
come
true, you will not regret it
because
at least you have been passionate and enthusiastic
instead
of lying in one place, not doing anything
but
want dream
come
true, that was impractical,
think
carefully
for yourself and don't
let
your immature affect others, most is your family. For me, I
think
tries
hard
everyday
for dream, no matter what
anyones
say, as long as
we belive
and act full of enthusiasm for our
youth
bacause
everday
is new day and there new
changes
are waiting for us to testing.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay The ancients used to say, "Youth is full of enthusiasm, but thinking is often immature and impractical. " What do you think about this opinion?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
235 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts