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The amount of drinkable water for people is decreasing day by day. What are the reasons for this decline? What can be done to prevent or minimize it? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The amount of drinkable water for people is decreasing day by day. What are the reasons for this decline? What can be done to prevent or minimize it? 25OBX
Since time immemorial, in certain dry parts of the world, water has always been a scarce natural resource. However, in present time due to various causes the level of drinkable water is declining day by day and scarcity of water has become a global issue. In this essay the ensuing paragraphs will enunciates some reasons that are contributing to this problem and will elicit certain steps that can help authorities and an individual in controlling the decreasing quantity of fresh water. There are compelling reasons of reducing potable water continuously. In this respect, the foremost one is overpopulation in metropolitan areas. This phenomenon of urbanization lead to excess usage of water by various activities such as washing vehicles, clothes, cleaning homes and utensils. Eventually, usable water is going to waste at vast as compared to normal rate. On the top of it, settled industries of chemicals, gases and goods dropping their solid and dry hazardous waste into natural resources as example in lakes, rivers and ocean. These ongoing processes of distinct sectors whether it is private organization or an individual (public one) not even deducting the ratio of available drinking water on earth but also polluting it. National authorities, on the flip side, can control the surge by implementing best education schemes regarding aforementioned global water issue. To prevent water pollution and to conserve it, strict guidelines and regulations must be implemented on the ground level in each and every city, state and country. Additionally, a perfect infrastructure need to be built in order to purify, store and use the rainfall and ocean water. On this part a best example can be taken from UAE (United Arab Emirates) where government has constructed atleast two big designs in all suburb areas to utilize it. Thus even although, issue of extinction of water is growing as a universal problem, there are several means and methods available by which both the government and an individual can limit this from worsening.
Since time immemorial, in certain dry parts of the world,
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water
has always been a scarce natural resource.
However
, in present time due to various causes the level of drinkable
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
is declining day by day and scarcity of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
has become a global issue. In this essay the ensuing paragraphs will enunciates
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some
reasons that are contributing to this problem and will elicit certain steps that can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
authorities and an individual in controlling the decreasing quantity of fresh water.

There are compelling reasons of reducing potable
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
continuously
. In this respect, the foremost one is overpopulation in metropolitan areas. This phenomenon of urbanization lead to excess usage of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
by various activities such as washing vehicles, clothes, cleaning homes and utensils.
Eventually
, usable
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
is going to waste at vast as compared to normal rate. On the top of it, settled industries of chemicals, gases and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
goods
dropping their solid and dry hazardous waste into natural resources as example in lakes, rivers and ocean. These ongoing processes of distinct sectors whether it is private organization or an individual (public one) not even deducting the ratio of available drinking
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water
on earth
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but
also
polluting it.

National authorities, on the flip side, can control the surge by
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implementing best
education schemes regarding aforementioned global
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water
issue. To
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
prevent
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water
pollution and to conserve it, strict guidelines and regulations
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
be implemented
on the ground level in each and every city, state and country.
Additionally
, a perfect infrastructure need to
be built
in order to purify, store and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
the rainfall and ocean
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water
. On this part
Use "the" with the superlative.
a
best example can
be taken
A determiner is probably missing here: "from the UAE".
from UAE
(United Arab Emirates) where
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
has constructed
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atleast
two
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big
designs in all suburb areas to utilize it.

Thus
even although, issue of extinction of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
is growing as a universal problem, there are several means and methods available by which both the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
and an individual can limit this from worsening.
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IELTS essay The amount of drinkable water for people is decreasing day by day. What are the reasons for this decline? What can be done to prevent or minimize it?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
327 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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