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the advantages brought by the spread of English as a global language outweigh the disadvantages

Today's fast-growing technology is making this world a 'glocal' (global + local) village. People are being connected via a language which is universally comprehensible. This language is none than English. In spite of being spoken in various styles, English has successfully captured the attention of all people belonging to various sections of the society. It is this characteristic that has made it the 'global language'. The global language status that English enjoys is an advantage to many sectors namely tourism, banking, education, health, etc. Every being is dependent on one another for survival and so are languages. It is imperative for us to note its transition from being a language of class to becoming an important tool for connecting various sections and sectors of the society. Take for instance the sector of tourism which is developing by leaps and bounds. An individual is becoming more of an explorer and English as a communication tool has helped him discover the importance of many cultures and traditions. The banking sector also has an important role to play in connecting and improving various businesses. The medical industry is coming up with various solutions to problems involving critical care and we have to note how Scientists from the world over have a role to play here. Education is another important industry that needs to be mentioned here. The possibility of comprehending the vastness of the English usage lies in educating the masses both in schools and outside, about the effective uses of a tool that helps you connect globally. In spite of these, it is the worry of many that English has brought in an enormous amount of globalisation, that many people today are in a vulnerable situation. This vulnerability is with regard to the sidelining of one's own regional language/mother tongue and their cultural practices. If this step-motherly attitude can be overcome, there is nothing more advantageous than having the benefit of both a universal language and a regional language. With the world moving at this speed, it is inevitable for the existence of a global language whose advantages mask the disadvantages that it carries along.
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various
styles, English has
successfully
captured the attention of all
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people
belonging to
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various
sections of the society. It is this characteristic that has made it the 'global language'. The global
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language
status that English enjoys is an advantage to
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many
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sectors
namely
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are
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languages
. It is imperative for us to note its transition from being a
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language
of
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class
to becoming an
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important
tool for connecting
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various
sections and
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sectors
of the society. Take
for instance
the
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sector
of tourism which is developing by leaps and bounds. An individual is becoming more of an explorer and English as a communication tool has
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helped
him discover the importance of
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many
cultures and traditions. The banking
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sector
also
has an
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important
role to play in connecting and improving
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various
businesses. The medical industry is coming up with
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various
solutions to problems involving critical
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care and
we
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note how Scientists from the world over have a role to play here. Education is another
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important
industry that needs to
be mentioned
here. The possibility of comprehending the vastness of the English usage lies in educating the masses both in schools and outside, about the effective
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uses
of a tool that
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helps
you connect globally.
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many
that English has brought in an enormous amount of
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people
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today
are in a vulnerable situation. This vulnerability is with regard to the sidelining of one's
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own
regional language/mother tongue and their cultural practices. If this step-
motherly
attitude can
be overcome
, there is nothing more advantageous than having the benefit of both a universal
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language
and a regional
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language
. With the world moving at this speed, it is inevitable for the existence of a global
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language
whose advantages mask the disadvantages that it carries along.
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IELTS essay the advantages brought by the spread of English as a global language outweigh the disadvantages

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  American English
1 paragraphs
353 words
5.5
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