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that learning a new language is compulsory can easily interrupt the development of the students’ mother tongue

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First, that learning a new language is compulsory can easily interrupt the development of the students’ mother tongue. Since learning a foreign language is extremely time-consuming, these periods which can be utilized in educating students on their mother-tongue are replaced. For example, as a student, while I only have four Literature lessons a week, the number of English lessons in a week is five. Compared on a larger scale, there is a significant gap between the time I study English and the time I learn Vietnamese. Therefore, learning a foreign language should remain as a choice for students who have a stable basis in their first language.
First
, that learning a new
language
is compulsory can
easily
interrupt the development of the
students’
mother tongue. Since learning a foreign
language
is
extremely
time-consuming, these periods which can
be utilized
in educating
students
on their mother-tongue
are replaced
.
For example
, as a
student
, while I
only
have four Literature lessons a week, the number of English lessons in a week is five. Compared on a larger scale, there is a significant gap between the time I study English and the time I learn Vietnamese.
Therefore
, learning a foreign
language
should remain as a choice for
students
who have a stable basis in their
first
language
.
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IELTS essay that learning a new language is compulsory can easily interrupt the development of the students’ mother tongue

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
107 words
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