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do you agree or disagree that advertising tell you a lot about the country. use specific reasons to support your answer.

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Advertisements are a very popular way to introduce the culture and trends of a country to the rest of the world. They let people to know about the country or nation. this is a fact This is a fact that media gains a lot of power and it is very essay to explore a country. In this essay we present arguments and prove them why it is so crucial. Firstly, the main focus on creating ads is to attract the target audience. It is very trendy now a day, to put ad on TV or on internet to gain attention of customers. It is a reality that today almost every person has an access to internet. So letting to know about a country is actually not difficult. If we talk about food and customers, there are a number of companies and brands that run ads on TV and obviously the person watching the ads getting information about the nation. People in this era, not only watch local channels, but they also have an interest towards other international channel. For example, if a person is watching Turkey’s channel there will be ads and by seeing them intentionally or unintentionally, he comes to know about the culture, tradition, places and fashion sense about that country. Another possible example about effectiveness of ads in term of exploring the country is the cultural shows and sports events. Every channel does publicize their major events happening in the country like independence day and all historic events. These are a great source of letting people to know about the country. Finally, there is no point of disagreement about ads and the link of exploring the homeland. They are very useful because we came to know with many thing without going there.
Advertisements are a
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popular way to introduce the culture and trends of a
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country
to the rest of the world. They
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let
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people
to
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know
about the
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country
or nation.
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is a fact This is a fact that media gains
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a lot of
power and it is
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very
essay to explore a
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country
. In this essay we present arguments and prove them why it is
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so
crucial.

Firstly
, the main focus on creating ads is to attract the target audience. It is
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very
trendy
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now
a day, to put ad on TV or on internet to gain attention of customers.

It is a reality that
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today
almost every person has
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an access
to internet.
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So
letting to
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know
about a
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country
is actually not difficult.

If we talk about food and customers, there are a number of
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companies
and brands that run ads on TV and
obviously
the person watching the ads getting information about the nation.

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People
in this era, not
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only
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watch
local channels,
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they
also
have an interest towards other international channel.

For example
, if a person is watching Turkey’s channel there will be ads and by seeing them
intentionally
or
unintentionally
, he
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comes
to
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know
about the culture, tradition, places and fashion sense about that country.

Another possible example about effectiveness of ads in term of exploring the
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country
is the cultural
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shows
and sports
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events
. Every channel does publicize their major
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events
happening in the
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country
like
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independence day
and all historic
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events
. These are a great source of letting
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people
to
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know
about the country.

Finally
, there is no point of disagreement about ads and the link of exploring the homeland. They are
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very
useful
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because
we came to
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know
with
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many thing
without going there.
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IELTS essay that advertising tell you a lot about the country. use specific reasons to support your answer.

Essay
  American English
8 paragraphs
295 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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