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Do you agree or disagree that a higher education leads to a better career?

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Most people agree that a higher education leads to a better career. IN my opinion, access to a high education is enormously beneficial to a successful career. I feel this way for two reasons, which will explore in the following essay. To begin with, numerous universities are limited in study places. Therefore it is necessary to select the applicants by their grade point average. As a result only the well-educated students are able to receive a students place for instance in a elite university such as Harvard.
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that a higher education leads to a better career. IN my opinion, access to a high education is
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IELTS essay that a higher education leads to a better career?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
87 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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