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PROBLEM WITH SOLUTION FORMAT GENERAL LINE/PARAPHRASING THESIS: It is the utmost need of an hour to control it and for that it is imperative to examine the main causes or reasons behind this malic problem. I would discuss all these points in the forth coming paragraphs. OR This essay will shed some light on the need to look for an effective plan and the alternatives that could put an end to these ever growing issues in the near future. BP1: To commence with, first and foremost reason behind this problem is 1st cause + effect and the second more significant factor aggravating this menace is 2nd cause + effect. Moreover, because of these reasons it put adverse effects on the society and making the situation worse and uncontrollable. BP2: However, few steps could prove beneficial to eradicate this evil. Initially, educational awareness could help to restrain or curb this vicious practice. For instance, educational institutes, alma matters or government should canvass against this. Mo

PROBLEM WITH SOLUTION FORMAT GENERAL LINE/PARAPHRASING THESIS: It is the utmost need of an hour to control it and for that it is imperative to examine the main causes or reasons behind this malic problem. I would discuss all these points in the forth coming paragraphs. OR This essay will shed some light on the need to look for an effective plan and the alternatives that could put an end to these ever growing issues in the near future. BP1: To commence with, first and foremost reason behind this problem is 1st cause + effect and the second more significant factor aggravating this menace is 2nd cause + effect. Moreover, because of these reasons it put adverse effects on the society and making the situation worse and uncontrollable. BP2: However, few steps could prove beneficial to eradicate this evil. Initially, educational awareness could help to restrain or curb this vicious practice. For instance, educational institutes, alma matters or government should canvass against this. Mo 56B1N
It is the utmost need of an hour to control it and for that it is imperative to examine the main causes or reasons behind this malic problem. I would discuss all these points in the forth coming paragraphs. To commence with, first and foremost reason behind this problem is 1st cause + effect and the second more significant factor aggravating this menace is 2nd cause + effect. Moreover, because of these reasons it put adverse effects on the society and making the situation worse and uncontrollable. However, few steps could prove beneficial to eradicate this evil. Initially, educational awareness could help to restrain or curb this vicious practice. For instance, educational institutes, Alma matters or government should canvass against this. Moreover, more stringent laws should be made and enforced to keep regular check on this practice. In a nutshell, I would like to say that this problem cannot be solved by one individual alone rather everyone need to get together and fight against the evil, so as to make the world a better place to live in.
It is the utmost need of an hour to control it and for that it is imperative to examine the main causes or reasons behind this
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malic
problem. I would discuss all these points in the forth coming paragraphs.

To commence with,
first
and foremost reason behind this problem is 1st cause + effect and the second more significant factor aggravating this menace is 2nd cause + effect.
Moreover
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
of these reasons it put adverse effects on the society and making the situation worse and uncontrollable.

However
, few steps could prove beneficial to eradicate this evil.
Initially
, educational awareness could
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
to restrain or curb this vicious practice.
For instance
, educational institutes, Alma matters or
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
should canvass against this.
Moreover
, more stringent laws should
be made
and enforced to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
regular
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
check
on this practice.

In a nutshell, I would like to say that this problem cannot
be solved
by one individual alone
rather
everyone need to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
together and fight against the evil,
'So as to' expresses purpose and is used in formal texts. Consider using "to"
so as to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
the world a better place to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
in.
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IELTS essay PROBLEM WITH SOLUTION FORMAT GENERAL LINE/PARAPHRASING THESIS: It is the utmost need of an hour to control it and for that it is imperative to examine the main causes or reasons behind this malic problem. I would discuss all these points in the forth coming paragraphs. OR This essay will shed some light on the need to look for an effective plan and the alternatives that could put an end to these ever growing issues in the near future. BP1: To commence with, first and foremost reason behind this problem is 1st cause + effect and the second more significant factor aggravating this menace is 2nd cause + effect. Moreover, because of these reasons it put adverse effects on the society and making the situation worse and uncontrollable. BP2: However, few steps could prove beneficial to eradicate this evil. Initially, educational awareness could help to restrain or curb this vicious practice. For instance, educational institutes, alma matters or government should canvass against this. Mo

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
178 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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