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How we can save the environment. To begin with saving the environment which should be protected jungles and forests, also wild animals because of destroying natural habitats. One way to maintain the ecosystem naturally and regularly, people should dwell from nature separately. Namely, tour agencies should be paid taxes and penalties highly. In this way they apply and attitude towards environment legally. Another solution variety of shows about extinct animals deforestations and jungles should be shown in public. They will be prevented from the poor consequence of destroying natural habitat. As a matter of fact, the representatives of every country in green party should be paid attention with great care. Clearly if these parties did not stay in the last place, people would destroy natural process. All in all, there are many solutions to the problem of destroying natural habitats. The sooner these solutions are put into the action, the more reducing extinct of nature will be in the Earth.
How we can save the environment. To
begin
with saving the environment which should
be protected
jungles and forests,
also
wild animals
because
of destroying
natural
habitats. One way to maintain the ecosystem
naturally
and
regularly
,
people
should dwell from nature
separately
.
Namely
, tour agencies should
be paid
taxes and penalties
highly
. In this way they apply and attitude towards environment
legally
. Another solution variety of
shows
about extinct animals
deforestations
and jungles should
be shown
in public. They will be
prevented
from the poor consequence of destroying
natural
habitat. As a matter of fact, the representatives of every country in green party should
be paid
attention with great care.
Clearly
if these parties did not stay in the last place,
people
would
destroy
natural
process. All in all, there are
many
solutions to the problem of destroying
natural
habitats. The sooner these solutions
are put
into the action, the more reducing extinct of nature will be in the Earth.
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IELTS essay Thank you my dear you too!

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  American English
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160 words
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