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In your opinion, what has been the most important inventions of the past 100 years?

In your opinion, what has been the most important inventions of the past 100 years? PLOdE

Whether the development of modern technology should be permitted to advance unhindered. Therefore, indeed to my mind, this is a beneficial trend and it should be encouraged. In addition, in the last 100 years many inventions and innovations have been created that make society’s life better -in particular- the most useful that can stand out is internet. To begin with, the internet differs from previous innovations in that it is an extraordinarily dynamic.

“Whether” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Whether
 the development of modern technology should be permitted
 to advance unhindered. Therefore
, indeed
 to my mind, this is a beneficial trend and it should be encouraged
. In addition
, in the last 100 years This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 inventions and innovations have been created
 that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 society’s life better -in particular
- the most useful that can stand out is internet. To This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
begin
 with, the internet differs from previous innovations in that it is an extraordinarily
 dynamic. 