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Tell Me About Your Teacher Whom Impressed You? Who is he/she? When you meet him/her? How you impressed by him?

Tell Me About Your Teacher Whom Impressed You? Who is he/she? When you meet him/her? How you impressed by him? LBDl3
Well, basically all teachers have created best impact at me. But all of them one teacher was mine favorite his name was Mr. Wajid Ali Khan. He had been teaching us Science his teaching method was absolutely amazing he used thought us in common language he is the only one teacher whom every students were enjoying while obtaining classes. I quite remember that, when I was joined the school probably he was the teacher who helped me a lot to overcome my fear. When I saw him I just got afraid by his look he looked so angry but after I started acquiring my studies under of him I felt very comfortable. As I informed to my parents about him they got relied on him, because they were completely satisfied though I would get a good education under of guidance. As I mentioned in first paragraph that, his teaching skills were so excellent one day we went to theater to watch a movie and that movie was Godzilla it was my first time when went to watch movie in that cinema while watching movie I got sick as I told you that it was my time so didn't feel comfortable and I started vomit over there, one my friends he informed to the teacher and took me out the theater and helped me a lot to get recover after that incident I got fan of him. Overall, this essay I wrote about my teacher which I felt strongly that he had created impact at me and as well as on other students too, at that we consider him as our best teacher and lovely person this earth.
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impact at me.
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all of them one
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teacher
was mine favorite his name was Mr.
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Wajid
Ali Khan. He had been teaching us Science his teaching method was
absolutely
amazing he
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used
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thought
us in common language he is the
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only
one
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teacher
whom every
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students
were enjoying while obtaining classes.

I quite remember that, when I was
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joined
the school
probably
he was the
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teacher
who
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helped
me a lot to overcome my fear. When I
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saw
him I
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just
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got
afraid by his look he looked
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so
angry
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but
after I
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started
acquiring my studies under of him I felt
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very
comfortable. As I informed to my parents about him they
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got
relied on him,
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because
they were completely satisfied though I would
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get
a
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good
education under of guidance.

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paragraph that, his teaching
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skills
were
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so
excellent one day we went to theater to
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watch
a
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movie
and that
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movie
was Godzilla it was my
first
time when went to
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watch
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movie
in that cinema while watching
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movie
I
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got
sick as I
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told
you that it was my time
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so
didn't feel comfortable and I
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started
vomit over there, one my friends he informed to the
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teacher
and took me out the theater and
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helped
me a lot to
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get
recover after that incident I
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got
fan of him.

Overall
, this essay I wrote about my
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teacher
which I felt
strongly
that he had created impact at me and
as well
as on other students too, at that we consider him as our best
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teacher
and lovely person this earth.
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IELTS essay Tell Me About Your Teacher Whom Impressed You? Who is he/she? When you meet him/her? How you impressed by him?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
277 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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