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Teenagers are facing problems at house and school. What are the reasons? How to solve this problem?

Teenagers are facing problems at house and school. What are the reasons? How to solve this problem? 0Ek7l
Juvenile has been encountered lot of issues; especially while they are at home and school. There are several causes behind it along with solution, both have been discussed in following paragraphs. To begin with, there are number of consequences occurred among children when they are at house and school. First and foremost, is noisy atmosphere. As several individuals living in joint family due to this people interact with each other along with neighbours and many others. Thus, though for their offspring to concentrate in disturbing atmosphere. Apart from this, ragging and bullying cases has been surging in schools. As newcomer enrolled in school at that time old students teasing and making fun of them. For instance, it has been revealed by Times Of India, in India, majority of students have been facing student who are ragging and bullying, each year the ratio has been accelerating. Hence, many pupils are suffering from depression and anxiety. However, preventing this issue is not only parents concerned but also government responsibility too. Commencing with, parents have to understand and provide them comfortable space where they offspring can focus on their studies and instead of making noise they may be quite until children finish their studies. Furthermore, authority should have to play big role and by enforcing law and regulations they may control the things which happening in school. For example, in India, several schools announced that, who don't obey the rules and trying to break those rules will be suspended. To conclude, although several issues are occurred among adolescent from difficult in concentrate on studies while at home and other students who annoyed, there are abundance of option to tackle the major concern.
Juvenile has
been encountered
lot of
issues;
especially
while they are at home and
school
. There are several causes behind it along with solution, both have
been discussed
in following paragraphs.

To
begin
with, there are number of consequences occurred among children when they are at
house
and
school
.
First
and foremost, is noisy atmosphere. As several individuals living in joint family due to this
people
interact with each other along with
neighbours
and
many
others.
Thus
, though for their offspring to concentrate in disturbing atmosphere. Apart from this, ragging and bullying cases has been surging in
schools
. As newcomer enrolled in
school
at that time
old
students
teasing and making fun of them.
For instance
, it has
been revealed
by Times Of India, in India,
majority of
students
have been facing
student
who are ragging and bullying, each year the ratio has been accelerating.
Hence
,
many
pupils are suffering from depression and anxiety.

However
, preventing this issue is not
only
parents concerned
but
also
government
responsibility too. Commencing with, parents
have to
understand and provide them comfortable space where
they offspring
can focus on their studies and
instead
of making noise they may be quite until children finish their studies.
Furthermore
, authority should
have to
play
big
role and by enforcing law and regulations they may control the things which happening in
school
.
For example
, in India, several
schools
announced that, who don't obey the
rules
and trying to break those
rules
will
be suspended
.
To conclude
, although several issues
are occurred
among adolescent from difficult in concentrate on studies while at home and other
students
who annoyed, there are abundance of option to tackle the major concern.
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IELTS essay Teenagers are facing problems at house and school. What are the reasons? How to solve this problem?

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3 paragraphs
279 words
6.0
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