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Technology in educational system

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In the modern world technology play vital role in the human lives. The computer is integrating a vast role in the education, medical and scientific research field. This eassy would characterise about the impact of computers in the education system. Commensing with the first and foremost, nowadays the range academic institutions is enhanced by the introduction of the cutting-edge technologies. Therefore, the degree of teaching level also has been polifirised. The breakthrough in the technology not only support the educational system but also encourage the students to advance the skills and talents. Equally relavent to this, if the work load of the teachers are reduced then it will aid the techers to provide wonderful classes to the learners. For example, introduction of the online learning are becoming more advantageous to the learners. However, the lack of face to face interaction is the main disadvantages of the online training. On the other hand, the integrated technology into the classrooms are not only having more advantageous but also encourage certain dissatisfication to the students aswell as to the teachers. In spite of it, the digital era can paves way to the learners to get distracted by new applications. The implementation of the innovations will have certain level of academic risk factors. The technology not only spoil the quality time but also create aburpt towards the learners attitude and character. It bring out the distraction of the society. To be concluded the introduction of the computer in the education system possess both positive and negative impacts. Holistic if the teachers are well trained, then the system can be carried out in a elegant manner. Thus it will be a humogous motivation to the learners in the future.
In the modern world
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technology
play vital role in the human
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lives
. The computer is integrating a vast role in the education, medical and scientific research field. This
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eassy
would
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characterise
about the impact of computers in the education
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system
.
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Commensing
with the
first
and foremost, nowadays the range academic institutions
is enhanced
by the introduction of the cutting-edge
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technologies
.
Therefore
, the degree of teaching level
also
has been
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polifirised
. The breakthrough in the
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technology
not
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only
support the educational
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system
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but
also
encourage the students to advance the
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skills
and talents.
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Equally
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relavent
to this, if the work load of the teachers are
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reduced
then it will aid the
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techers
to provide wonderful classes to the
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learners
.
For example
, introduction of the online learning are becoming more advantageous to the
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learners
.
However
, the lack of face to face interaction is the main disadvantages of the online training.
On the other hand
, the integrated
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technology
into the classrooms are not
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only
having more advantageous
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but
also
encourage certain
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dissatisfication
to the students
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aswell
as to the teachers.
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it, the digital era can
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paves
way to the
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learners
to
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get
distracted by new applications. The implementation of the innovations will have certain level of academic
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risk
factors. The
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technology
not
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only
spoil the quality time
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but
also
create
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aburpt
towards the
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learners
attitude and character. It
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bring
out the distraction of the society. To
be concluded
the introduction of the computer in the education
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system
possess both
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positive
and
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negative
impacts. Holistic if the teachers are
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well trained
, then the
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system
can
be carried
out
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in a elegant manner
.
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Thus
it will be a
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humogous
motivation to the
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learners
in the future.
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IELTS essay Technology in educational system

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
284 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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