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Technology allows us to have a useful and interesting life than in the past. Do you agree or disagree?

Technology allows us to have a useful and interesting life than in the past. LrqXR
Nowadays, it is increasingly acknowledged that technologies are playing more and more important role in our life. While some people believe that technology allows people to have a useful and interesting life, others oppose that it is harmful to life. As far as I am concerned, using technology in life will be more beneficial in respect of this issue. People who emphasize the importance of advantage of technology are primarily focusing on convenience it brings. They advocate that some technology products such as smart phones and tablets make people communicate without limits of time and location. Moreover, the public internet and free Wi-Fi are quite common in today's society. That is to say, people can not only update news and reports easily, but also get notification of events quickly. It is evidently reasonable for me to believe that technologies are of benefit for our life. The main justification of this view is that mechanized equipment is commonly used in many factories, which would save manpower and reduce operating time. Therefore, companies can not only reduce costs, but also improve work efficiency. In addition, people no longer need to spend a lot of energy on their work. That is to say, they can have more time to be with their families and strengthen the family bond. In a nutshell, although this controversial topic never fails to attract the public attention, we may safely reach the conclusion that technologies will be more advantageous for our life.
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increasingly
acknowledged that
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technologies
are playing more and more
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important
role in our
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life
. While
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some
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people
believe that
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technology
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allows
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people
to have a useful and interesting
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life
, others oppose that it is harmful to
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life
. As far as I
am concerned
, using
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technology
in
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life
will be more beneficial in respect of this issue.

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People
who emphasize the importance of advantage of
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technology
are
primarily
focusing on convenience it brings. They advocate that
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some
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technology
products such as smart phones and tablets
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make
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people
communicate without limits of time and location.
Moreover
, the public internet and free Wi-Fi are quite common in
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today
's society.
That is
to say,
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people
can not
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only
update news and reports
easily
,
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but
also
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get
notification of
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events
quickly
.

It is
evidently
reasonable for me to believe that
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technologies
are of benefit for our
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life
. The main justification of this view is that mechanized equipment is
commonly
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used
in
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many
factories, which would save manpower and
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reduce
operating time.
Therefore
,
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companies
can not
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only
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reduce
costs,
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but
also
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improve
work efficiency.
In addition
,
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people
no longer need to spend
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a lot of
energy on their work.
That is
to say, they can have more time to be with their families and strengthen the family bond.

In a nutshell, although this controversial topic never fails to attract the public attention, we may
safely
reach the conclusion that
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technologies
will be more advantageous for our
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
life
.

IELTS essay Technology allows us to have a useful and interesting life than in the past.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
244 words
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