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Teachers are the ones who play an important role in the education of future generations

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Teachers are the ones who play an important role in the education of future generations, besides teaching students through books, some also teach students by showing on technology devices. Both of these methods have their own advantages for teaching. The first is about teachers teaching students from their own knowledge and curriculum. This is very good because teachers can easily share new but familiar knowledge with students to help students absorb the lesson faster, for example, in my class, my teacher often teaches the knowledge in the textbooks with her own knowledge, so we understood the lesson very quickly. However, the fact that teachers only teach in textbooks is sometimes boring for students because most of the exercises in the book are exercises that may have been repeated many times, the current generation is often very curious about it. New things than the knowledge they have read and understood in books The second is about teaching students mainly with the help of technology and teaching applications. This way of teaching is very interesting and students also like it, in this time of having to study online because of the covid pandemic like now, computers or phones are indispensable tools for every teacher or student. Or presentations through smart devices all have their own way of teaching, so students can absorb the lesson in many different ways, which is very good because it can forge ways of thinking so that students can It is easier to apply it to the lesson, but teaching through technology devices also has disadvantages, the lecture information taken online may not be the same as the curriculum, which is very difficult for students. Another disadvantage is that looking at a computer or phone for too long will cause eye strain. Overall, each teacher has a different way of teaching, teachers are very important, but smart devices also help in teaching. In my own opinion, it is advisable to combine both the knowledge of the teacher and the information on technology applications.
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books


The second is about
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IELTS essay Teachers are the ones who play an important role in the education of future generations

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
335 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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