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Talking about my family all day

I am a boy. I live in capital city. My family is big. We are not extended. My hair is black and my eyes are green. We have cat. She likes eat food. She is Sara. Now is winter and cold. So we keep warm. Am doing a car course. Will drive two years. Hope to get it. I wear clothes. Gloves, underwear, jeans, pullover. Whatever. Am practising the test. Will get a band that is not mine. It is not mine. Not mine. My band in writing is 7. This shows the a2 candidate level.
I am a boy. I
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live
in capital city. My family is
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big
. We are not extended. My hair is black and my eyes are green. We have cat. She likes eat food. She is Sara.
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Now
is winter and
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cold
.
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So
we
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keep
warm.
Did you mean “am I” or “I am”?
Am
doing a car course. Will drive two years. Hope to
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get
it. I wear clothes. Gloves, underwear, jeans, pullover. Whatever.
Did you mean “am I” or “I am”?
Am
Possible spelling mistake. ‘practising’ is British English.
practising
the
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test
. Will
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get
a band
that is
not mine. It is not mine. Not mine. My band in writing is 7. This
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shows
the a2 candidate level.
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IELTS essay Talking about my family all day

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
96 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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