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talked about 3 things like to do

talked about 3 things like to do eBJp

I like doing is getting up late in the morning, During weekend and holidays it is so pleasurable to just lie on bed till late in the morning. I also like to try a new cooking receipe in the kitchen. Another things i like to do is go went for shopping with my best friend and elder sister. I also like taking evening walks around my neighborhood. In the evening the air is cool and refreshing. The children are busy playing and the neighbors are friendlier. So I take leisurely strolls, sometimes stopping to play with other children and sometimes stopping to chat with the neighbors. Another thing that I like doing is getting up late in the morning. During weekdays I have to get up early or I will be late for the school. On Saturdays, Sundays and holidays, it is so pleasurable to just lie on bed till late in the morning without having to get up and hurry for school. Again I tend to lie too long in bed and my mother has to come and scold me to get up.

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late
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morning
, During weekend and holidays it is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 pleasurable to This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 lie on bed till You use this word too often, consider replacing it withslowlast-minute
late
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morning
. I also
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So
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 strolls, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :in some instances
sometimes
 stopping to play with other children and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :in some instances
sometimes
 stopping to chat with the neighbors.

Another thing that I like doing is getting up You use this word too often, consider replacing it withslowlast-minute
late
 in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdawn
morning
. During The comma is probably missing here: "weekdays, I".weekdays, I
weekdays I
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 up early or I will be You use this word too often, consider replacing it withslowlast-minute
late
 for the school. On Saturdays, Sundays and holidays, it is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 pleasurable to This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 lie on bed till You use this word too often, consider replacing it withslowlast-minute
late
 in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdawn
morning
 without having to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 up and hurry for school. Again I tend to lie too long in bed and my mother This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:oughts to
has to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 and scold me to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 up. 