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talk about your trip which you have chance to visit

talk about your trip which you have chance to visit PRAq2
I could never forget the trip that I went to Hue. This is the first time I have had a chance to see the palace of the Nguyen Kings. In the Tet Festival of 2019, I and my family went to Hue city and visited “Dai Noi Hue”. My parents made a plan one month ago for the trip. 5. 00 a. m we started going to Hue. It is about 200 km. After 3 hours, we arrived at the center of Hue. My family bought tickets and began to discover “Dai Noi”. It was so amazing. Everything was beautiful and great. The palace was huge, including a garden, lake, hall, and the tomb of kings. When I went to the main hall-where place of the king worked, I saw many things is so strange. I had a chance to see the king and queen’s clothes. It also had many traditional musical instruments. About 11: 30 a. m, I listened to “Nha Nhac Cung Dinh Hue”. It was so interesting. It was an amazing trip. And I wished I could visit Hue again in the future.
I could never forget the trip that I went to
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Hue
. This is the
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time I have had a chance to
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see
the palace of the Nguyen
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Kings
. In the Tet Festival of 2019, I and my family went to
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Hue
city and visited “
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Dai
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Noi
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Hue”
. My parents made a plan one month ago for the trip. 5. 00 a. m we
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started
going to
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Hue
. It is about 200 km. After 3 hours, we arrived at the center of
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Hue
. My family
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bought
tickets and began to discover “
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Dai
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Noi
”. It was
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so
amazing. Everything was
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beautiful
and great. The palace was huge, including a garden, lake, hall, and the tomb of
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kings
. When I went to the main hall-where place of the
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king
worked, I
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saw
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many
things is
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so
strange. I had a chance to
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see
the
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king
and queen’s clothes. It
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had
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many
traditional musical instruments. About 11: 30 a. m, I listened to “
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Nha
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Nhac
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Cung
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Dinh
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Hue”
. It was
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interesting. It was an amazing trip. And I wished I could visit
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Hue
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IELTS essay talk about your trip which you have chance to visit

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
186 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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