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Talk about your summer vacation this year.

Talk about your summer vacation this year. Ydmed

This year I have a summer vacation like every other year, but because of the outbreak of the Covid-19 epidemic, people are restricted from going out and not gathering in large numbers. My family has enough conditions to endure this epidemic season. I use my phone almost every day because I have nothing to do and can't go anywhere. I often play online games with people around the world to learn interesting things. Because of the complicated development of the epidemic, the number of people dying is increasing and the number of vaccines is less and less available to use. Near the end of August my summer vacation ended and I started studying online with my teachers and friends. I wonder when the Covid epidemic will end so I can go back to school?

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so
 I can go back to school? 