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Talk about your summer vacation this year.

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This year I have a summer vacation like every other year, but because of the outbreak of the Covid-19 epidemic, people are restricted from going out and not gathering in large numbers. My family has enough conditions to endure this epidemic season. I use my phone almost every day because I have nothing to do and can't go anywhere. I often play online games with people around the world to learn interesting things. Because of the complicated development of the epidemic, the number of people dying is increasing and the number of vaccines is less and less available to use. Near the end of August my summer vacation ended and I started studying online with my teachers and friends. I wonder when the Covid epidemic will end so I can go back to school?
This year I have a summer vacation like every other year,
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of the outbreak of the Covid-19
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,
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people
are restricted
from going out and not gathering in large numbers. My family has
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enough
conditions to endure this
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epidemic
season. I
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use
my phone almost every day
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because
I have nothing to do and can't go anywhere. I
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often
play online games with
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
around the world to learn interesting things.
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Because
of the complicated development of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
epidemic
, the number of
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people
dying is increasing and the number of vaccines is less and less available to
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use
. Near the
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end
of August my summer vacation ended and I
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started
studying online with my teachers and friends. I wonder when the
Did you mean "COVID-19" or the alternative spelling "Covid-19" (= coronavirus)?
Covid
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epidemic
will
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end
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so
I can go back to school?

IELTS essay Talk about your summer vacation this year.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
134 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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