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Talk about your plans and a challenge you persisted to achieve.

Talk about your plans and a challenge you persisted to achieve. 1nNry
I have new objective today, it is writing an essay, so I have to write more than 150 words. To be honest it is considered as a challenge becuase I have merely fiveinutes and about fourty seconds, furthermore, I utilize my smartphone to write it and everyone knows that it is not fast way to write an essay. However, I have accepted this challenge, consequently, I am writing as quick as I can and there is no way to slow down. The device that is used for this mission is the big elephant in the room. In other words, utilizing phone to do such mission is kind of crazy. In addition, my keyboard is not that good; I ought to adapt to the place of every letter. How can I do it? ! I do not have any clue.
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way to write an essay.
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accepted
this challenge,
consequently
, I am writing as quick as I can and there is no way to slow down. The device
that is
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used
for this mission is the
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elephant in the room.
In other words
, utilizing phone to do such mission is kind of crazy.
In addition
, my keyboard is not that
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good
; I ought to adapt to the place of every letter. How can I do it? !

I do not have any clue.

IELTS essay Talk about your plans and a challenge you persisted to achieve.

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
139 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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