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talk about your new friend

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When talk about new friend what you say? Well, you can say name, age and where she lives. But firstly I want to say everyone about may be character. Oh, she makes me feeling comfortable, happy, relax when we say about each other. Special she talks about her idol who are BTS. This is a famous idol in the world. She jokes with me that all of members BTS is her husband. Oh, so fun. It is a littel of things about her. She is also a kind girl. she helped me so much. Next, I knewn that she has a strong passion of music. She has a really cool name, Quynh sound like as a flower. A girl is 17 years old. and from Binh Minh, Vinh Long and so friendly. I hope we can meet in the future and I'll tell her all about when I see her.
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me feeling comfortable, happy, relax when we say about each other. Special she talks about her idol who are BTS. This is a
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idol in the world. She jokes with me that
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BTS is her husband. Oh,
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fun. It is a
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helped
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much.
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that she has a strong passion of music. She has a
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sound like as a flower. A girl is 17 years
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Binh
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Long and
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friendly. I hope we can
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IELTS essay talk about your new friend

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
150 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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