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Talk about your jouney and back home.

Talk about your jouney and back home. Ep1RR

Today is my back home day. The journey from the city where i had the program was somehow horrible, due to the problems i have faced with bus. Firstly, i was about to miss the bus. While i was at the bathroom, the bus started to move and really went out the terminal. Consequently, i ran fast until i reached the bus. To be honest, the driver was rude likewise the waiter. However, this a lesson for me, becuase the driver had told we are going to have a long reat after ten minutes, but my Turkish was not that good to understand proparly.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
Today
 is my back home day. The journey from the city where Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 had the program was somehow horrible, due to the problems Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 have faced with bus. Firstly
, Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 was about to miss the bus. While Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 was This is a collocation error. Use "in" for rooms. Revise: "in the bathroom".in the bathroom
at the bathroom
, the bus This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocate
move
 and really
 went out the terminal. Consequently
, Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 ran This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:quickrapidswiftprompt
fast
 until Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 reached the bus. To be honest, the driver was rude likewise
 the waiter. However
, this a lesson for me, Possible spelling mistake found.because
becuase
 the driver had This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :informed
told
 we are going to have a long Possible spelling mistake found.greatmeatrealrestseatbeat
reat
 after ten minutes, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 my Turkish was not that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 to understand Possible spelling mistake found.properly
proparly
. 