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Talk about interesting journey you took recently.

Talk about interesting journey you took recently. 7W3AA
I have a traveling mindset. going from place to place is my hobby. I whenever I get adequate time I go out with my friends or family. So in the last winter i went to Cox's Bazar along with my family and it was a very wonderful journey, a joyous one. I really felt ecstatic when I went there. I went to Cox's Bazar by train and I had an aisle seat beside the window. in the entire journey I kept enjoying the scenic view and the gentle breez. after 7 hours tiresome journey we reached in to our destination. we booked a 5 star hotel named prashad paradise. the hotel staffs were amicable.
I have a traveling mindset.
going
from place to place is my hobby. I whenever I
get
adequate time I go out with my friends or family.
So
in the last winter
i
went to Cox's
Bazar
along with my family and it was a
very
wonderful journey, a joyous one. I
really
felt ecstatic when I went there. I went to Cox's
Bazar
by train and I had an aisle seat beside the window.
in
the entire journey I
kept
enjoying the scenic view and the gentle
breez
.
after
7 hours tiresome journey we reached in to our destination.
we
booked a
5 star
hotel named
prashad
paradise.
the
hotel staffs were amicable.
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IELTS essay Talk about interesting journey you took recently.

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  American English
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