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considering that adults spends much of their lives at work, having job satisfaction is extremely important

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Nowadays, people are giving most of time of their life to their jobs then it is imperative to have enjoyable job. This essay will discuss the main component contribute to job stratification including purpose acknowledgement and area of interest. Furthermore, this essay will also explain how its feasible to fulfill the expectation of job satisfaction for all employees. The main significant aspect of job satisfaction is purpose. Most of people are working but. they do not know why they are doing the job. in other words. For example, a doctor knows she or she are saving human life that's the reason why doctor enjoy their profession a lot. The other important factor is Area of interest. In other words, People have to choose their career according to their strength and interest. For insane, If person are interested in medical science, that person have to choose medical profession as career not others. It provides satisfaction in job. The expectation of job satisfaction for all worker can be achievable by providing flexible hours and rewords on hard work. Firstly, Flexible hours. provide little bit time flexibility, it means worker can start their work at any time in morning even though they have to complete their total number of working hours. As a result, they will not be warring about being late in office. For example, worker can start their working time when they want. secondly, Appreciation by reward keep employees motivated and enthusiastic such as best employee of the month award, these type of rewords play essential role to make the jobs interesting and exciting. In conclusion, in this essay I discussed two main factors consist for job satisfaction that are purpose and area of interest. Moreover, this essay also explained how the realistic is it.
Nowadays,
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are giving most of
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of their life to their
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jobs
then it is imperative to have enjoyable
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job
. This
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essay
will discuss the main component contribute to
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job
stratification including purpose
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acknowledgement
and area of
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interest
.
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will
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feasible to fulfill the expectation of
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job
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satisfaction
for all employees.

The main significant aspect of
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job
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satisfaction
is purpose. Most of
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people
are working
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.
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they
do not know why they are doing the
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job
.
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in
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words.
For example
, a doctor knows she or she
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are
saving human life that's the reason why doctor enjoy their profession a lot.

The
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other
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factor is Area of
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. In
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words,
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People
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have to
choose their career according to their strength and
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interest
. For insane, If person
are interested
in medical science, that person
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have to
choose medical profession as career not others. It provides
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satisfaction
in job.

The expectation of
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job
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satisfaction
for all worker can be achievable by providing flexible hours and rewords on
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hard
work.
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provide
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flexibility, it means worker can
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start
their work at any
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in morning
even though
they
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have to
complete their total number of working hours.
As a result
, they will not be warring about being late in office.
For example
, worker can
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start
their working
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time
when they want.

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secondly
, Appreciation by reward
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keep
employees motivated and enthusiastic such as best employee of the month award, these type of rewords play essential role to
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the
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jobs
interesting and exciting.

In conclusion
, in this
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I discussed two main factors consist for
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job
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satisfaction
that are purpose and area of
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interest
.
Moreover
, this
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also
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explained
how the realistic is it.
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IELTS essay considering that adults spends much of their lives at work, having job satisfaction is extremely important

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
294 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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