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Hi, my name is Ta Thu Giang. Today, I am going to talk about the advantages of online shopping. I extremely like buying anything online and now with the Covid-19 disease, online shopping becomes more and more popular. So I often buy online shopping. There are a lot of different and unique products such as clothes, shoes, cosmetics, food, in general, have all the small to big items. We have many benefits to online purchases by clicking a computer's mouse. I can order anytime because the online shop is open 24 hours and 7 days a week for automated reply services. There are many choices for buying products that come with technical explanations and I can choose which suits me. Besides, I can read reviews about the products being purchased. Moreover, I can refer and order from overseas stores with a fast delivery speed. Last weekend, I bought a new dress for my best friend on her birthday. I didn't have time to go to the shop because I'm very busy with my homework so I decided to buy gifts online on Shopee at midnight. Wow, many choices from different shops, and I can find online stores that sell items at low prices so I compared the prices easily and picked out a nice dress. There is no waiting in long lines for check out. That's why I prefer online shopping to traditional shops. Thanks for listening.
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. There are
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a lot of
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and unique products such as clothes, shoes, cosmetics, food,
in general
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small
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by clicking a computer's mouse. I can order anytime
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online
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shop
is open 24 hours and 7 days a week for automated reply services. There are
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many
choices for buying products that
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, I can read reviews about the products being
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bought
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shop
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because
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busy with my homework
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choices from
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, and I can find
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stores that sell items at low prices
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I compared the prices
easily
and picked out a nice dress. There is no waiting in long lines for
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out. That's why I prefer
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to traditional
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. Thanks for listening.
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IELTS essay talk about advantage of online shopping

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
237 words
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