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Talk about a job you would like to do in the future.

Talk about a job you would like to do in the future. le3WX
I’m studying at University of HUTECH Education in Ho Chi Minh city. My hobbies are to listen music, watching movies, reading books. My dream job would be to be a copywriter! As versatile writers, copywriters have to be a keen understanding of how language can be used to convince readers, sell products, and tell a story. Copywriters are often self-employed. To do this job i have to be able to write fluently and will have to study the customer's problem very carefully, and find a solution to improve it. Unfortunately, there are very few opportunities to make a living as a copywriter because too many competitors. Even so, I think I'm willing to work hard to achieve this goal. I'll gather all the information I can and then apply my experience while analyzing the information. With this combination, I'm confident I'll make the correct important decisions.
I’m studying at University of
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HUTECH
Education in
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Ho Chi Minh city
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My hobbies are to listen music, watching movies, reading books.

My dream job would be to be a copywriter!

As versatile writers, copywriters
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have to
be a keen understanding of how language can be
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used
to convince readers, sell products, and
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tell
a story.

Copywriters are
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often
self-employed.

To do this job
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be able to write
fluently
and will
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study the customer's problem
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very
carefully
, and find a solution to
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improve
it.

Unfortunately, there are
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few opportunities to
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make
a living as a copywriter
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because
too
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many
competitors. Even
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, I
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think
I'm willing to work
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hard
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I'll gather all the information I can and then apply my experience while analyzing the information. With this combination, I'm confident I'll
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make
the correct
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decisions.

IELTS essay Talk about a job you would like to do in the future.

Essay
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8 paragraphs
146 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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