One school of thought is that instead of budgeting to cure illnesses, the government
should focus financial resources on shaping a healthy lifestyle among citizens to
prevent health issues. From my perspective, I object to this idea because both treatment and prevention are equally important.
On the one hand, further investment in simulate physical activities and eradicating
alcohol addiction is crucial to reduce the potential threat of serious ailments. First
and foremost, the world has been witnessing an increasing number of cases of obesity and heart diseases which are allegedly under the influence of sedentary lifestyle. Therefore, it is necessary for authorities to construct more communal facilities such as public playgrounds and gardens with the aim to encourage people to attend outdoor activities. Furthermore, it goes without saying that the popular habit of drinking beer or wine, in Vietnam for example, is the culprit of a myriad of traffic accidents and cancers. The Vietnamese government, hence, has to
grant extra fundings to education campaigns to change people’s perception of drinking culture and tightening management of consumption of alcoholic liquor.
On the other hand, an equal concentration of money is essentially required to build extra medical infrastructure and research for more advanced medication. To commence with, apart from diseases associated with the unhealthy style of living, human beings are afflicted with innate disorders, natural epidemics like H5N1 or Ebola, and accidental injuries. To be equally important, thousands of people have been diagnosed with not only the century illness namely AIDS but also many kinds of cancers which have no or little effective remedies. By virtue of that, only with a significant amount of money spent on improving healthcare service; establishing
hospitals and clinics; and discovering new cures can the government provide more medical access to patients and guarantee the well-being of human society.
By way of conclusion, owing to the aforementioned arguments, I am of the opinion that government should allocate equal money to both cures and encourage a
healthy lifestyle. 
One school of  
thought
 is that  
instead
 of budgeting to cure illnesses, the  
government
should focus financial resources on shaping a healthy lifestyle among citizens to 
prevent
 health issues. From my perspective, I object to this  
idea
  because
 both treatment and prevention are  
equally
  important
.
On the one hand,  
further
 investment in simulate physical activities and eradicating
alcohol addiction is crucial to  
reduce
 the potential threat of serious ailments.  
First
and foremost, the world has been witnessing an increasing number of cases of obesity and heart diseases which are allegedly under the influence of sedentary lifestyle.  
Therefore
, it is necessary for authorities to construct more communal facilities such as public playgrounds and gardens with the aim to encourage  
people
 to attend outdoor activities.  
Furthermore
, it goes without saying that the popular habit of drinking beer or wine, in Vietnam  
for example
, is the culprit of a myriad of traffic accidents and cancers. The Vietnamese  
government
,  
hence
,  
has to
grant extra  
fundings
 to education campaigns to  
change
  people
’s perception of drinking culture and tightening management of consumption of alcoholic liquor. 
On the other hand
, an equal concentration of money is  
essentially
 required to build extra medical infrastructure and research for more advanced medication. To commence with, apart from diseases associated with the unhealthy style of living, human beings  
are afflicted
 with innate disorders, natural epidemics like H5N1 or Ebola, and accidental injuries. To be  
equally
  important
, thousands of  
people
 have  
been diagnosed
 with not  
only
 the century illness  
namely
 AIDS  
but
  also
  many
 kinds of cancers which have  
no
 or  
little
 effective remedies. By virtue of that,  
only
 with a significant amount of money spent on improving healthcare service; establishing
hospitals and clinics; and discovering new cures can the  
government
 provide more medical access to patients and guarantee the well-being of human society.
By way of conclusion, owing to the aforementioned arguments, I am of the opinion that  
government
 should allocate equal money to both cures and encourage a
healthy lifestyle.