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Child crime rate are increasing does current government helpful for decrease crime rate in child please highlight do you support or not this statement.

Child crime rate are increasing does current government helpful for decrease crime rate in child please highlight do you support or not this statement. BYj26

Children trend to adopt there environment so in early age when they grow, started to watch family clash, fight which make them increase there violence behaviour to start crime. I adamantly agree with government policy there are trying there best give those child a good environment and programs so they can become good adult who leads to society or live a normal life. To decrease a crime rate we should have solution for young child and help them know what outcome they will get if they did some crime. In conclusion it's our responsibility to make sure our youth does not take wrong way and they get lost in there life it's our job to help them to stand firm.

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so
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started
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watch
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make
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behaviour
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start
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agree
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government
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those child
 a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
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so
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good
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live
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help
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get
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some
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make
 sure our youth does not take This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:incorrect
wrong
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way and
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get
 lost in there life it's our job to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 them to stand firm. 