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Supermarkets should only sell food produced from within their own country rather than imports from overseas.

Nowadays, almost every country can provide customers with a variety of local and foreign products. However, it is claimed, that shops should sell food only created in the native country. This essay will discuss, why I believe, it is essential to buy products from local farmers. In addition, this essay will also discuss my opinion on the importance of different food all around the world. On the one hand, having food only from their own country would more support farmers. This means money from the sales would stay in a country. For instance, when citizens buy a vegetable from Spain the profit is delivered to the Spanish farmers. As a result, many farmlands in Slovakia are not receiving enough money, due to the competition between other producers. In contrast, it is beneficial to provide an ample range of products. Without products from overseas or at least from neighbors, it would be impossible to buy vital ingredients. Such as exotic fruits, several spices, or 80% chocolate. Besides, it is known, that majorities of vegetables and fruits are important for human health. For example, an avocado is transported from Asia, and Slovakia does not have a proper environment for planting. Consequently, the customers would miss these products, and would not be satisfied. In conclusion, this essay discussed the advantages of both sides. In my opinion, to implement only the local products would be beneficial for some minorities. Although it may make majorities of people obnoxious. Therefore, I am certain, the government should provide Slovak producers with more opportunities. Plus, to continue with the exportation of foreign products.
Nowadays, almost every
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country
can provide customers with a variety of local and foreign
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products
.
However
, it
is claimed
, that shops should sell food
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only
created in the native
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country
. This essay will discuss, why I believe, it is essential to
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buy
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products
from local farmers.
In addition
, this essay will
also
discuss my opinion on the importance of
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different
food all around the world.

On the one hand, having food
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only
from their
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own
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country
would more support farmers. This means money from the sales would stay in a
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country
.
For instance
, when citizens
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
a vegetable from Spain the profit
is delivered
to the Spanish farmers.
As a result
,
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many
farmlands in Slovakia are not receiving
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enough
money, due to the competition between other producers.

In contrast
, it is beneficial to provide an ample range of
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products
. Without
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products
from overseas or at least from neighbors, it would be impossible to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
vital ingredients. Such as exotic fruits, several spices, or 80% chocolate.
Besides
, it
is known
, that majorities of vegetables and fruits are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
for human health.
For example
, an avocado
is transported
from Asia, and Slovakia does not have a proper environment for planting.
Consequently
, the customers would miss these
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products
, and would not
be satisfied
.

In conclusion
, this essay discussed the advantages of both sides. In my opinion, to implement
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only
the local
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products
would be beneficial for
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some
minorities.
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Although
it may
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make
majorities of
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people
obnoxious.
Therefore
, I am certain, the
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government
should provide Slovak producers with more opportunities. Plus, to continue with the exportation of foreign
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products
.
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IELTS essay Supermarkets should only sell food produced from within their own country rather than imports from overseas.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
265 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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