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summerize the points made in the lecture being sure to explain how they oppose specific points made in the reading passage The food industry has been overusing hard to recycle plastic packaging However it has caused severe environmental issues As a soluti

summerize the points made in the lecture being sure to explain how they oppose specific points made in the reading passage The food industry has been overusing hard to recycle plastic packaging However it has caused severe environmental issues As a soluti GMWwe
The reading and lecture are both about casein-based plastic packages. Whereas the author of reading states advantages of this packaging, the the lecturer casts doubts on the main points made in the reading by providing numerous reasons. First of all, according to the author of the passage, casein based packaging can reduce large amount of waste from our environment as these can easily dissolve in water. However, the lecturer disputes this point. He says that casein is extreme durable in water. Therefore, we will need an extra packing to protect the inner layer which will result in polluting environment. Secondly, the reading states that, casein have smaller pores which can help in blocking oxygen molecules and therefore it become more effective in keeping food fresh. Nevertheless, the lecturer refutes the argument. He argues that, its low durability with water result in absorbing water molecules and result in oxidation of food. In addition he points out that this also result in low elasticity of the packaging. Finally, the reading claims that these bags can be nutritious as they contain high number of proteins and other beneficial substances. On the other hand, the lecturer believes that these are big threat for those people who are allergic to milk and other dairy substance. In conclusion, although the reading and lecture are both about the edible milk based packaging, the three main point in the reading are effectively challenged by the lecturer.
The
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reading
and lecture are both about casein-based plastic packages. Whereas the author of
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reading
states advantages of this
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packaging
,
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the the
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lecturer
casts doubts on the main
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points
made in the
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reading
by providing numerous reasons.
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First of all
, according to the author of the passage, casein based
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packaging
can
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reduce
large amount of waste from our environment as these can
easily
dissolve in
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water
.
However
, the
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lecturer
disputes this
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point
. He says that casein is extreme durable in
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water
.
Therefore
, we will need an extra packing to protect the inner layer which will
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result
in polluting environment.
Secondly
, the
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reading
states that, casein have smaller pores which can
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help
in blocking oxygen molecules and
therefore
it
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become
more effective in keeping food fresh.
Nevertheless
, the
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lecturer
refutes the argument. He argues that, its low durability with
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water
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result
in absorbing
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water
molecules and
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result
in oxidation of food. In
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addition he
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points
out that this
also
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result
in low elasticity of the
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packaging
.
Finally
, the
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reading
claims that these bags can be nutritious as they contain high number of proteins and other beneficial substances.
On the other hand
, the
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lecturer
believes that these are
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big
threat for those
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people
who are allergic to milk and other dairy substance.
In conclusion
, although the
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reading
and lecture are both about the edible milk based
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packaging
, the three main
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point
in the
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reading
are
effectively
challenged by the
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lecturer
.
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IELTS essay summerize the points made in the lecture being sure to explain how they oppose specific points made in the reading passage The food industry has been overusing hard to recycle plastic packaging However it has caused severe environmental issues As a soluti

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  American English
1 paragraphs
238 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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