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The reading and lecture are both about some commonly used air purifiers. Where as the author of the reading states pros of these purifiers, the lecturer suggests that there are some cones for each filter. The lecturer casts doubts on the main points made in the reading by providing three reasons. First of all, the according to the reading, HEPA filters are capable in trapping large pollutant particles without producing secondary pollution. However, the lecturer disputes this point. He says that these filters are incapable in getting rid from small particles like viruses. Furthermore, he mentions that these viruses grow and multiply on the filter itself and then get mix with the air it produce. Hence, cause pollution. Secondly, the reading states that ozone generating filters remove airbone chemicals by help of ozone reaction and than producing a pleasant smell. Nevertheless, the lecturer refutes this argument. he argues that these filters are hazardous. As ozone generated by these filters is very high in concentration which can be harmful for our body and can cause skin irritation and could be extreme dangerous for eyes. Furthermore, he added that ozone react same as gasoline and that's why it make it even more dangerous. Finally, the reading claims that uv air purifiers remove bacterias from air which are harmful and it operate quietly. On the other hand, the lecturer belives that these filters can not clear microscopic particles like dust and also fail in removing unpleasant smell from air. In conclusion, although the reading and lecture are both about air purifiers, the three main points made in the reading are effectively challenged by the lecturer.
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states pros of these
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, the
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suggests that there are
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cones for each
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. The
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casts doubts on the main points made in the
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by providing three reasons.

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, the according to the
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, HEPA
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filters
are capable in trapping large pollutant particles without producing secondary pollution.
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, the
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disputes this point. He says that these
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filters
are incapable in getting
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particles like viruses.
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itself and then
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mix with the
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it produce.
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, cause pollution.

Secondly
, the
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states that ozone generating
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of ozone reaction and
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refutes this argument.
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are hazardous. As ozone generated by these
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is
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high in concentration which can be harmful for our body and can cause skin irritation and could be extreme
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for eyes.
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Finally
, the
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claims that
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remove
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from
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which are harmful and it
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can not
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microscopic particles like dust and
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fail in removing unpleasant smell from air.

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, although the
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and lecture are both about
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air
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purifiers
, the three main points made in the
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are
effectively
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IELTS essay air purifier

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
272 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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