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Summarize the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they respond to the specific concerns presented in the reading passage. Remove Salinity from The Salton Sea

Summarize the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they respond to the specific concerns presented in the reading passage. Remove Salinity from The Salton Sea bYOM3

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lecture
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salt
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different
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small
 parts have much more salinity than large parts. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdiscourseinstructionaddress
lecture
, on the other hand
, posits that the Salton Sea is located
 in a region that experiences geologically
 actions such as an earthquake. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
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 quake all walls fall down, then the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 of low salinity sections mix with high salinity segments. 