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The image presents how geothermal power plants producing electricity, while it shows the mechanism of an energy source that is used whether for home or industry. The Geothermal power plant mechanism is beginning from cold water pumped down as long through the injection well and is transferred to the production well, the transfer process is ongoing underground, called a geothermal zone or hot rocks. Meanwhile, the injection well and the production well have the same length approximately 4. 5km. After some process, the mechanism continues to condensation, and enter the steam process in the generator turbine. When the step has reached the generator turbine, then the result transmits to the tower subsequently, it will supply the electricity to the settlement for facilitating electronic people usage. Overall, the electricity that people consume is from the geothermal power plant, the process is started from the cold water that is pumped down and be transferred to the generator turbine.
The image presents how geothermal power plants producing electricity, while it
shows
the mechanism of an energy source
that is
used
whether for home or industry.

The Geothermal power plant mechanism is beginning from
cold
water pumped down as long through the injection
well
and
is transferred
to the production
well
, the transfer
process
is ongoing underground, called a geothermal zone or hot rocks. Meanwhile, the injection
well
and the production
well
have the same length approximately 4.
5km
.

After
some
process
, the mechanism continues to condensation, and enter the steam
process
in the generator turbine. When the step has reached the generator turbine, then the result transmits to the tower
subsequently
, it will supply the electricity to the settlement for facilitating electronic
people
usage.

Overall
, the electricity that
people
consume is from the geothermal power plant, the
process
is
started
from the
cold
water that
is pumped
down and
be transferred
to the generator turbine.
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IELTS essay summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons were relevant.

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4 paragraphs
156 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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