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Many old buildings protected by law are part of a nations history some people think they should be knocked down and replaced by new ones.Do you agree or disagree.

Many old buildings protected by law are part of a nations history some people think they should be knocked down and replaced by new ones. a1Pd
It is believed that historical monuments shielded by the government that are symbol of cultural heritage. However, others believed that buildings should be demolished and constructing new ones. I disagree to the argument as memorial building illustrates are culture. On the brighter side, historical buildings provides an information about their culture, sacrifice and many more. Moreover, this attach us with our ancestors as well as these buildings are used now as a spiritual and tourists places. Which inturn leads to the revenue generation for the governing body that further will be used in the development of the nation. Additionally, engravings on old buildings helps the scientists in different types of researches besides this humans have been knowned about their existence from how long back. On the other hand, destructing the building is preferred by some. It is because of modernisation as due to it people like new building with advanced technology. Which can be beneficial in some ways. While, instead of constructing new building they should be renovated and altered with mew gadgets. Which will fulfill the dual aspect of saving the heritage alongwith advanced technology. To sum up, no doubt new technology is advantageous. However, monument have a slight edge over it as it makes the people about the past.
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is believed
that historical monuments shielded by the
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government
that are symbol of cultural heritage.
However
, others believed that
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buildings
should
be demolished
and constructing
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new
ones. I disagree to the argument as memorial
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building
illustrates are culture. On the brighter side, historical
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buildings
provides an information about their culture, sacrifice and
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many
more.
Moreover
,
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this attach
us with our ancestors
as well
as these
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buildings
are
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used
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now
as a spiritual and tourists places. Which
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inturn
leads to the revenue generation for the governing body that
further
will be
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used
in the development of the nation.
Additionally
, engravings on
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old
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buildings
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helps
the scientists in
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different
types of researches
besides
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this
humans have been
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knowned
about their existence from how long back.
On the other hand
, destructing the
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building
is preferred
by
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some
. It is
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because
of
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modernisation
as due to it
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people
like
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new
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building
with advanced technology.
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Which
can be beneficial in
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some
ways. While,
instead
of constructing
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new
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building
they should
be renovated
and altered with mew gadgets.
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Which
will fulfill the dual aspect of saving the heritage
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alongwith
advanced technology. To sum up, no doubt
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new
technology is advantageous.
However
, monument have a slight edge over it as it
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makes
the
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people
about the past.
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IELTS essay Many old buildings protected by law are part of a nations history some people think they should be knocked down and replaced by new ones.

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