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Such a scientific research are done by government rather then that should be given to private companies. do you agree or disagree

Such a scientific research are done by government rather then that should be given to private companies. Nrwod
In contemporary era, scientic are know as mostly smart person for their new innovations of technology. Several people think that scientific research should be done by private company. But I fully disagree with the view because more funding as well as security and more youngsters are working instead of private companies further given below. Firstly, government trying to develop country for their betterness ofpeople, thinking beyond for other as their responsibility to a democratic leaders. To rise at different platform as a politicens, businessman, investors, scientic graduates, post graduates, masters in specific field this persons gives their codination to a nation. According to me in research work, government should give a controles to a private companies beacause their is huge invester they to give their money on it. By seeing that project as much as possible earily in time. They can also provide more security to it because it is a project of nations. Secondly, By making a MOU between two side with government will take help of private companyies finalised their project is a another helping option to government. But private option to government. In privating such research are going in would such as NANA, also in China they all by done by government help but funding is by invester. Furthermore ISRO is also a such space research center with is bond with government. Instead of that and more technology will developed more in short period of time. Their are no more barrier of higher authority. Overall it is only one risk when project fails To sum up it is interesting to say that research should be done by private companies because they have more funding, huge invester due to which more technology will developed in short span. Rather than giving to government people.
In contemporary era,
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scientic
are know as
mostly
smart person for their new innovations of technology. Several
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people
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think
that scientific
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research
should
be done
by
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private
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company
.
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But
I
fully
disagree with the view
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because
more funding
as well
as security and more youngsters are working
instead
of
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private
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companies
further
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given
below.

Firstly
,
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government
trying to develop country for their
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betterness
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ofpeople
, thinking beyond for other as their responsibility to a democratic
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leaders
. To rise at
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different
platform as a
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politicens
, businessman, investors,
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scientic
graduates, post graduates, masters in specific field
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this
persons gives their
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codination
to a nation.
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According to me
in
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research
work,
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government
should give a
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controles
to a
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private
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companies
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beacause
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their
is huge
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invester
they to give their money on it. By seeing that
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project
as much as possible
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earily
in time. They can
also
provide more security to it
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because
it is a
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project
of nations.

Secondly
, By making a
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MOU
between two side with
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government
will take
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help
of
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private
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companyies
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finalised
their
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project
is
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a
another helping option to
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government
.
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But
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private
option to
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government
. In
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privating
such
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research
are going in would such as
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NANA
,
also
in China they all by done by
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government
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help
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but
funding is by
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invester
.
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ISRO is
also
a such space
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research
center with is bond with
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government
.
Instead
of that and more technology will
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developed
more in short period of time.
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Their
are no more barrier of higher authority.
Overall
it is
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only
one
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risk
when
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project
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fails


To sum up it is interesting to say that
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research
should
be done
by
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private
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companies
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because
they have more funding, huge
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invester
due to which more technology will
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developed
in short span.
Rather
than giving to
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government
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people
.
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IELTS essay Such a scientific research are done by government rather then that should be given to private companies.

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  American English
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295 words
5.5
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