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Studying with a group of students in a classroom is more beneficial than learning online at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Studying with a group of students in a classroom is more beneficial than learning online at home. eYKG
Some people prefer to learn by themselves alone with the Internet, while other thought that study in a group can give more effective. In my opinion, I totally agree to learn in a group of people for some reasons. First of all, the scientists prove that when you are happy you can easily learn new things and solve your tough and obviously, learning with friends is funnier than learning alone all day. Secondly, learning with your friends will give you a big motivation, that boost through a hard time. For example, when you face with a tough math exercise, if you have your friend, both of you can discuss the problem, and also your friend will see the hole in your logic. Learning with friends is the best to explore new things and make all the knowledge easier to learning. So find a friend.
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big
motivation, that boost through a
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time.
For example
, when you face with a tough math exercise, if you have your
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friend
, both of you can discuss the problem, and
also
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friend
will
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the hole in your logic.

Learning with
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is the best to explore new things and
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all the knowledge easier to
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IELTS essay Studying with a group of students in a classroom is more beneficial than learning online at home.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
144 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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