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Studying at university or college

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Are you study at university or study at college? Or you do not study at any school? In the life, we can choose for ourselves one way to success. Not only studying at university to become a successful person, also we can learn at college. We can study at vocational training centers. But today, I going to talk about studying at university or college is better. For me, I will choose university. The first reason that I choose university is certificate. Nowadays, almost companies in Vietnam require university degree.
Are you
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at
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or
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at college? Or you do not
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study
at any school? In the life, we can choose for ourselves one way to success. Not
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only
studying at
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university
to become a successful person,
also
we can learn at college. We can
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study
at vocational training centers.
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But
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,
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to talk about studying at
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university
or college is better. For me, I will choose
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. The
first
reason that I choose
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is certificate. Nowadays, almost
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companies
in Vietnam require
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degree.
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IELTS essay Studying at university or college

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
89 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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