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STUDY ENGLISH WITH FOREIGNERS

STUDY ENGLISH WITH FOREIGNERS p11g2
In my opinion, for many English learners, speaking is the most difficult part. Therefore, EVUS creates a lot of opportunities for learners to practice speaking English. The teachers in EVUS often organize speaking clubs, speaking contests with foreign teachers, and friendly outdoor activities so that we can experience real-life situations, have fun, make new friends and improve our communication skills. They are more enjoyable than usual classes
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English learners, speaking is the most difficult part.
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opportunities for learners to practice speaking English. The teachers in
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organize speaking clubs, speaking contests with foreign teachers, and friendly outdoor activities
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that we can experience real-life situations, have fun,
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new friends and
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our communication
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IELTS essay STUDY ENGLISH WITH FOREIGNERS

Essay
  American English
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