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Some people think that community services is compulsory for high school students like charities and teaching to what extent do you agree or disagree

Some people think that community services is compulsory for high school students like charities and teaching br2A3
It is often argued by majority of all that without money community services should be a necessary part of High School programs like Charity improving the learning skills of neighbourhood in my opinion I think it is convenient way for childrens to give up moral I totally agree with this statement in upcoming paragraph to be get with if the children work unpaid community services they also knowledge about Charity to explain if the children page more money in Charity and help the charity person without money they also experience about Charity and they always encourage helps to other persons more over whenever the children teachings to other poor persons without and community or money they always share our knowledge and others children's this is a convenient way to improve their knowledge skills for students and it is a best way to knowledges other persons to clarify since the 21st century all the children were well educated and if they want they always share the knowledge poor people which is the good for all over the person two example although the money is a source of our life but if invisible help other person in any matters without any money which is the beneficial for their own and they always encourage other persons to help other people
It is
often
argued by majority of all that without
money
community services should be a necessary part of High School programs like
Charity
improving the learning
skills
of
neighbourhood
in my opinion I
think
it is
convenient
way for
childrens
to give up moral I
totally
agree
with this statement in upcoming paragraph to be
get
with if the
children
work unpaid community services they
also
knowledge
about
Charity
to
explain
if the
children
page more
money
in
Charity
and
help
the
charity
person
without
money
they
also
experience about
Charity and
they always encourage
helps
to
other
persons
more over whenever the
children
teachings to
other
poor
persons
without and community or
money
they always share our
knowledge
and others
children's this is a convenient way to
improve
their
knowledge
skills
for students and it is
a
best way to
knowledges
other
persons
to clarify since the 21st century all the
children
were
well educated
and if they want they always share the
knowledge
poor
people
which is the
good
for all over the
person
two example although the
money
is a source of our life
but
if invisible
help
other
person
in any matters without any
money
which is the beneficial for their
own and
they always encourage
other
persons
to
help
other
people
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IELTS essay Some people think that community services is compulsory for high school students like charities and teaching

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
216 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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