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In this set of materials the article posits that one famous painting which is attributed to Rembrandt - a Dutch painter - is not painted by her, and provides three reason of support.

In this set of materials the article posits that one famous painting which is attributed to Rembrandt - a Dutch painter - is not painted by her, and provides three reason of support. 85Jwr
In this set of materials the article posits that one famous painting which is attributed to Rembrandt - a Dutch painter - is not painted by her, and provides three reason of support. However, the lecturer raises questions on the ideas on presents some evidence to refute them all. First, the author of the reading passage states that the woman whom be painted in this art, is wearing dresses in some colors which is not expected from Rembrandt. On the contrast, the professor cast doubt on this point by saying that if the original painting will be revealed, this picture exactly is same with what we expected from Rembrandt. According to the professor, hundred years after original painting one other person added some colors to painting in order to improve the value of the portrait. The next explanation which is uttered in the article is that there are some contradictions between the colors and the shadows, while Rembrandt was a great painter. In contrary, the lecturer explains that if the original painting can be seen, everyone will notice that it is a realistic picture and colors and shadows are used in a perfect way, just as Rembrandt's other works. She mentions that the second painter made some errors when he was making changes in the painting. Finally, the article asserts that this picture was painted on the several pieces of wood and Rembrandt used to utilize one piece of wood for her works. Conversely, the speaker indicates that the examination showed that wood which used for this painting is from the same tree that Rembrandt used for her other paintings. She indicates that the original portrait was painted on the one piece of wood and the second painter after one hundred years used several pieces of wood.
In this set of materials the article posits that one
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a Dutch painter
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by her, and provides three reason of support.
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, the lecturer raises questions on the
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ideas
on presents
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evidence to refute them all.

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, the author of the reading passage states that the woman whom be
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painted
in this art, is wearing dresses in
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some
colors which is not
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expected
from Rembrandt. On the contrast, the professor cast doubt on this point by saying that if the
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original
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painting
will
be revealed
, this picture exactly is same with what we
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expected
from Rembrandt. According to the professor,
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years after
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original
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painting
one other person
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added
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some
colors to
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painting
in order to
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improve
the value of the portrait.

The
next
explanation which
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in the article is that there are
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some
contradictions between the colors and the shadows, while Rembrandt was a great painter. In contrary, the lecturer
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explains
that if the
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original
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painting
can be
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seen
, everyone will notice that it is a realistic picture and colors and shadows are
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used
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in a perfect way
,
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as Rembrandt's other works. She mentions that the second painter made
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some
errors when he was making
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changes
in the painting.

Finally
, the article asserts that this picture was
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painted
on the several
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pieces
of
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wood
and Rembrandt
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used
to utilize one
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piece
of
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wood
for her works.
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, the speaker indicates that the examination
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showed
that
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wood
which
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used
for this
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painting
is from the same tree that Rembrandt
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used
for her other
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paintings
. She indicates that the
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original
portrait was
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painted
on the one
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piece
of
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wood
and the second painter after one hundred years
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used
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IELTS essay In this set of materials the article posits that one famous painting which is attributed to Rembrandt - a Dutch painter - is not painted by her, and provides three reason of support.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
297 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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