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Students should pay the full cost if their own uuniversity studies , rather than have free higher education provided by the state . To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

Students should pay the full cost if their own uuniversity studies, rather than have free higher education provided by the state. with this opinion. Qdpb
The total fees of their own unicersity studies should be paid by the students, rather thab having the higher education which are provided by the goverment for free. I donot agree with the statement due to the fact that higher studies cost a lot amount of money and students will have burden of their studies and the amount of money they have to pay. There are the students who donot have good familt conditions, in such case many students will not be able to afford their universities cost. They will have to leave their studies. For example, if there are two children in a family and they are very poor in such situation parents will not be able to provide education for both the childrens. It will create more financial crisis in the family. They will not be able to fulfill their basic needs such as food clothes. Moreover, students will not be able to choose the subject of their intrest. On the other hand, there are many students who are willing to pay their school fees on their own. For instance, in many european countries after the completion of their school level children want to be independent. They want to take their responsibility by themself and if they will have pressure of both the work and studies then it will affect their studies. They will end up getting low marks in their studies. They wil not be able to balance everything which may hamper their physical as well as mental health. In conclusion, goverment should provide free higher education rather than taking full cost for their studies because every students donot have same family background and it will be hard for the students who want ti be independent.
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own
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unicersity
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studies
should
be paid
by the
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students
,
rather
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thab
having the higher education which
are provided
by the
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goverment
for free. I
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donot
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with the statement due to the fact that higher
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studies
cost a lot amount of money and
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students
will have burden of their
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studies
and the amount of money they
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have to
pay.

There are the
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students
who
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donot
have
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good
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familt
conditions, in such case
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many
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students
will not be
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able
to afford their universities cost. They will
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have to
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leave
their
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studies
.
For example
, if there are two children in a
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family and
they are
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very
poor in such situation parents will not be
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able
to provide education for both the
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childrens
. It will create more financial crisis in the family. They will not be
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able
to fulfill their basic needs such as food clothes.
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,
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students
will not be
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able
to choose the subject of their
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intrest
.

On the other hand
, there are
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many
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students
who are willing to pay their school fees on their
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own
.
For instance
, in
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many
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european
countries after the completion of their school level children want to be independent. They want to take their responsibility by
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themself
and if they will have pressure of both the work and
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studies
then it will affect their
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studies
. They will
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end
up getting low marks in their
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studies
.
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They
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wil
not be
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able
to balance everything which may hamper their physical
as well
as mental health.

In conclusion
,
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goverment
should provide free higher education
rather
than taking full cost for their
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studies
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because
every
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students
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donot
have same family background and it will be
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hard
for the
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students
who want ti be independent.
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IELTS essay Students should pay the full cost if their own uuniversity studies, rather than have free higher education provided by the state. with this opinion.

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