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Students in school should learn particular skills like car maintenance and bank account in addition to bank account subject.do you agree or disagree?

Students in school should learn particular skills like car maintenance and bank account in addition to bank account subject. 3Yd75

It is true that children’s should maintain their personal car and bank account To terms subjects. I completely agree with the statement this essay will discuss in coming passage. This society the children should be maintained this them self with personal news I like cars and personal bank account without depending on others and parents now it is a children’s are planning themselves to do part time jobs and and money ends money. Without depending on any other moreover they can manage to pay their fees is without any problem for example if you have seen the part-time workers who works in different malls and stores and then money and pay their fees it is a great thing Therefore they can travel long distance around the world can I am gain and gain knowledge all over the world they can learn new things new new subjects To sum up this essay has both advantages and disadvantages of maintaining account and cars

It is true that children’s should maintain their personal car and bank account To The verb after "to" should be in the base form: "term".term
terms
 subjects. I completely This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 with the statement this essay will discuss in coming passage.

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news
 I like cars and personal bank account without depending on others and parents This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
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part time
 jobs Possible typo: you repeated a wordand
and and
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 they can manage to pay their fees is without any problem for example
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seen
 the part-time workers who Did you mean "work"? Alternatively, check whether the singular of 'workers' should be used.work
works
 in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
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Therefore
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new
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new
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new
 subjects

To sum up this essay has both advantages and disadvantages of maintaining account and Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphcars.cars!cars?cars:cars,cars;
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