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students are traveling for start of university

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In recent years traveling has majorly become an individuals hobby. Recently studies shows that traveling not only reduces stress but also increases the age and also creates memories for lifetime. Today there is cut throat competition in every field be it education, business or I can even say social life. And hence it has led to increase in stress level. Today you can see that students are students are traveling abroad to explore places, understand the culture, getting to know people and moreover the taste buds have also led to explore new destination, exploring the food. Since, most of the students are adolescent, they love posting pictures on their social media account and in this way they are also preparing to boost their career as travel bloggers, food bloggers etc. Perhaps traveling is a major advantage before getting into any university, so it will help in getting along with the peers. Ofcourse everything has it own Pros and cons, but personally I do not have many disadvantages, however if I visit a country without prior research about the place, it could be a problem example, there could be linguistic barrier or the weather conditions could be too harsh i. e extremely cold or extremely hot. Sometimes over spending can be also a disadvantage. Proper safe & secure accommodation & transportation may not be available. However to conclude, I would like to say that traveling is best tool for refresher, so when you start your university you are relaxed and rejuvenated and can give your best in the academics.
In recent years traveling has
majorly
become an
individuals
hobby. Recently studies
shows
that traveling not
only
reduces
stress
but
also
increases the age and
also
creates memories for lifetime.

Today
there is
cut throat
competition in every field be it education, business or I can even say social life. And
hence
it has led to increase in
stress
level.
Today
you can
see
that
students are students are
traveling abroad to explore places, understand the culture, getting to know
people
and
moreover
the taste buds have
also
led to explore new destination, exploring the food. Since, most of the students are adolescent, they
love
posting pictures on their social media account and in this way they are
also
preparing to boost their career as travel bloggers, food bloggers etc. Perhaps traveling is a major advantage
before
getting into any university,
so
it will
help
in getting along with the peers.

Ofcourse
everything has it
own
Pros and cons,
but
personally
I do not have
many
disadvantages,
however
if I visit a country without prior research about the place, it could be a problem example, there could be linguistic barrier or the weather conditions could be too harsh i. e
extremely
cold
or
extremely
hot.
Sometimes
over spending can be
also
a disadvantage. Proper safe & secure accommodation & transportation may not be available.

However
to conclude
, I would like to say that traveling is best tool for refresher,
so
when you
start
your university you
are relaxed
and rejuvenated and can give your best in the academics.
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IELTS essay students are traveling for start of university

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
258 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
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