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The study environment in a university or college is challenging. Students should take an entrance exam to see if their skills and knowledge are appropriate for higher education. Graduation exams are simply one aspect of demonstrating a student's learning process, and many students only cope without having any real knowledge or talents. Another reason is that they lack self-direction, imitate others, following the wishes of parents, friends and the majority. For example, some students attend university for a while, they find themselves unsuitable for their major, leading to stress, depression, and self-pressure in the learning process. The significant consequences are lost time, money and effort.
The study environment in a university or college is challenging. Students should take an entrance exam to
see
if their
skills
and knowledge are appropriate for higher education. Graduation exams are
simply
one aspect of demonstrating a student's learning process, and
many
students
only
cope without having any real knowledge or talents. Another reason is that they lack self-direction, imitate others, following the wishes of parents, friends and the majority.
For example
,
some
students attend university for a while, they find themselves unsuitable for their major, leading to
stress
, depression, and self-pressure in the learning process. The significant consequences
are lost
time, money and effort.
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IELTS essay student take an entrance exam

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  American English
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105 words
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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